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		CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
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				 Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2015 12:05 pm    Post subject: Illustration | 
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				Hey everyone here's something new.
 
 
 
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		gogodr I post too much
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				 Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2015 2:07 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				I dig it.
 
Some color would help a lot to understand it tho. 
 
I understood that the man is the seed and the above is a tree after I saw the title "My blessing, my flower" , then I saw the ground. 
 
 
At first I thought it was a darker scene of smoke instead of it being a tree. 
 
 
One last thing, the lines thickness and detail on the very top, don't match with the rest of the piece as much. It becomes more thick and simple there.
 
 
Overall 8/10, I really like it.
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		CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
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				 Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2015 8:45 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				 	  | gogodr wrote: | 	 		  I dig it.
 
Some color would help a lot to understand it tho. 
 
I understood that the man is the seed and the above is a tree after I saw the title "My blessing, my flower" , then I saw the ground. 
 
 
At first I thought it was a darker scene of smoke instead of it being a tree. 
 
 
One last thing, the lines thickness and detail on the very top, don't match with the rest of the piece as much. It becomes more thick and simple there.
 
 
Overall 8/10, I really like it. | 	  
 
Thanks a lot for the feedback, another person said something similar to your first though. Another suggestion for colour we had was sort of a watercolour splatter on the flower. Maybe that will kick things up a bit.
 
 
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		Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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				 Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2015 1:32 am    Post subject:  | 
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				I think this would make an awesome wallpaper! Especially with that watercolor idea.
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		atom0s Moderator
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				 Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2015 2:06 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				Agreed, looks great. Would like to see it with color as well.
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		Brillia How do I cheat?
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				 Posted: Fri May 01, 2015 4:48 am    Post subject:  | 
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				Looks great, even without colors!
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				 Posted: Mon May 04, 2015 3:23 pm    Post subject:  | 
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				@Up2Admin: Thanks a lot, looking forward to adding that still not sure if I'm going to do it digital or traditional watercolour.
 
 
@atom0s, Brillias: Thanks a lot  
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