Cheat Engine

1929394839292057839194958 · Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 9:46 pm Post subject:

Alright get ready for a bit of cuntish behaviour from me. Please say so if you don't mind me doing it and I'll post again with detail.

ArcaneKnite · Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:46 pm Post subject:

Go ahead Connor.

ControlAltDelete · Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:58 pm Post subject:

render doesn't look like it fits
random guy flying in white space
weird top and bottom border that looks like it doesnt fit

I don't know shit about art but that's what I found wrong.

1929394839292057839194958 · Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 6:52 pm Post subject:

It looks completely low quality. Not in the sense that you didn't do it well, but in the sense that the image is rather low in quality. You've gone for a colour scheme of browney colours on top of white, which looks so monotonous and unless you've got a killer concept and execution to back it up (I recall a friend of mine a long time ago making a fossil report tag which was awesome and I really can't explain it more than that, but the colours were so boring looking and it didn't matter) and uh, tbh it just looks boring and empty. It also kinda looks like you've redrawn his left leg. Also there's no real flow to it either. There's a dude falling with some random shit coming out of his hand (and it blurs randomly at the end of it for some reason) infront of a white background with random C4Ds and lines on it. Why? What's the concept? I don't like tags that literally just get a render, put it on, cover it in C4Ds, fix it up and then release it. I like tags with actual concepts and good execution of those concepts. I means rue it could be abstract but unless it's FULLY abstract then don't bother with that kind of style. Try to think of more of a concept next time and do your best to stick to that concept rather than stray from it and just add random shit. It will come out a lot better that way as long as you put in the effort.
SO TO SUMMARISE,
Too much negative space in the wrong places, don't just fill it up with more C4Ds
Random blur at the end of that black blob, why?
Black blob, why?
No real concept shown
Monotonous colouring
Silly border, don't use borders

yeah.

Volcom880 · Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 3:21 am Post subject:

That 'dude' is Paul McCartney .