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yeah it is pretty bad.
-painting is awful I can pretty much see each stroke you made with your markers.
-there is no shading but somewhat kind of border for the letters
-I cant read a dam thing.
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Jefre.
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| gogodr wrote: | yeah it is pretty bad.
-painting is awful I can pretty much see each stroke you made with your markers.
-there is no shading but somewhat kind of border for the letters
-I cant read a dam thing. |
The coloring does suck, could afford actual graffiti markers, so I just used a bunch of markers i found around the house. I also find it pretty rare to see other people to actually be able to read a burner/wildstyle. About the shading, I wasn't sure how I was going to do it, so I just color it with the blue, etc.
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Too many spots that you didn't color in and it seems that you were incredibly lazy with its actual creation (white spots, bad strokes, messed up lines etc.). The type itself looks alright but it was just colored badly.
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| Jefre. wrote: | | gogodr wrote: | yeah it is pretty bad.
-painting is awful I can pretty much see each stroke you made with your markers.
-there is no shading but somewhat kind of border for the letters
-I cant read a dam thing. |
The coloring does suck, could afford actual graffiti markers, so I just used a bunch of markers i found around the house. I also find it pretty rare to see other people to actually be able to read a burner/wildstyle. About the shading, I wasn't sure how I was going to do it, so I just color it with the blue, etc. |
Letters should be able to be seen(I was able to read most of yours even though is awful), is not a matter of just doing random unreadable shit. You have various problems, colour choices, design, linework, shading, filling, etc.
If you're going to colour it that way then don't bother. Just leave the lines and keep doing that until you improve.
The best thing you can do if you really want to get into graffiti is practice with pencil each letter on whichever style you are going for until all your letters are atleast decent. Then after that start working on everything else I mentioned
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I can figure out what any graffiti says by looking at it for a few seconds, but I looked at yours for like a minute and couldn't figure it out at all. There's a point where you can get a little too crazy with the letters.
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The perspective is difficult to figure out as well.
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It's readable.
If you're a beginner, try making all lines the same width.
Also use less arrows.
Just keep the shadows black.
If you're going to use more colors, try to blend them in. Right now it looks like there are two lines of text at the first sight.
So, make the letters the same width to begin with, don't begin with a 'fat' letter and end with a small letter.
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| Color moar.
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It's ok.
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edit your post and remove that, it bugs a lot of us by stretching the page out. There's a reason he linked it.
Also, way too many white spots. D:
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| Could be better, looks like you didn't take much time.
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Dude, i'll tell you straight and don't get offended. IT'S AWFUL!
This isn't to criticize your art but may i ask, how young are you? The bad side is, I could hardly seen what's been written on it and your choice of color irritates the eye. Also mind your font style, it should go well with the other letters. But the good thing is and what's more important is you've a taken a step at it, just follow some tutorials and with more practice i'll bet you could make much better graffiti.
Goodluck. 
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