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Stylised Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:18 am Post subject: Starcraft Sig |
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I've gotten back into it recently, what do you think art?
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:25 am Post subject: |
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really, bad choice of design and illumination.
the background is dark and fuzzy but the main object is all sharp detailed and bright.
try again.. maybe other colors will help and less black.
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 1:43 pm Post subject: |
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Gogodr has the completely wrong reasons as to why this is a bad sig.
The lines going across need to be distorted like the rest, or to be removed completely. The red doesn't go with the green, so make the background a colour that does. Repost and let me CnC some more.
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 2:15 pm Post subject: |
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red and green are direct opposites they can go together as contrast colors :/
((not for blending though ))
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 7:57 pm Post subject: |
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Not blending...that's why I don't like it
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The Fish Expert Cheater
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:00 pm Post subject: |
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woulda been better with a cyan background
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Thanh =) Newbie cheater
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:39 pm Post subject: |
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I do not like the color scheme, don't do two radically different colors, do shades of one color to fit an overall theme.
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Selrahc Master Cheater
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Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:51 pm Post subject: |
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Get rid of the stripe in the background and change the background color to a more pleasing and matching color to the dood. Like a blue-ish.
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Stylised Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 12:59 am Post subject: |
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I see. After I change the background colour and change stripes I'll edit this.
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:15 am Post subject: |
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the background is just too strong, you are pushign it to extremes where a corner is all black and the other is an uber saturated green.
chek out this oen I made testing lens flares.
I created the background by picking some colors of the render and then smudging a lot
since your render is detailed try using a soft and simple background and then put some effects around your render so it stands out more.
also... you are overusing brushes in your background.. it looks messy .. simplify it.
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Stylised Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 2:22 am Post subject: |
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I see.
Simplify, more appropriate colours and make render stand out.
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Honda Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 3:02 am Post subject: |
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Take out the black bars, it's distracting.
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Stylised Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 4:47 am Post subject: |
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Updated.
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 6:22 am Post subject: |
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2. Much better, now you jut need a good light source that goes well with the render. Also the splatter is fucking stupid get rid of it. Border is pretty bad too come to think of it.
3. No.
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 11:42 am Post subject: |
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gah
you tried to make a backgroudn like the one I did, that is not cool, find your style.
I recommend you to use the first one, get rid of the middle line and change the backgroudn color.
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use the second one, desaturate the background a little, change that intense black for somethign more softer or change its blending mode and simplify it by removing some of the printed brushes in there.
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