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ShadowHopeful Expert Cheater
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:07 pm Post subject: new sig (ongoing), would like penis to comment |
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New sig i'm working on.
It's not finished, so i'm open to suggestions on how to improve it. thanks.
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sponge cake recipe Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:12 pm Post subject: |
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Get rid of the scanlines.
Also, who is Anonymous?
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ShadowHopeful Expert Cheater
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:16 pm Post subject: |
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Viral wrote: | Get rid of the scanlines.
Also, who is Anonymous? |
anyone here.
Removed the scanlines.
offtopic: it would be funny if someone was called anonymous...
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sponge cake recipe Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:27 pm Post subject: |
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Erugh, the style is there, but it doesn't blend.
You've just done a background and slapped the render on.
Text isn't great either.
Try to make the render fit into the background.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:28 pm Post subject: |
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I like it.
I suppose the coloring behind that ball thing Kirby's on looks a bit weird to be, but besides that... it's great! Simple, but it works.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 12:56 pm Post subject: |
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the ball thing is the emission from kirby's jet pack.
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Sharpies! Master Cheater
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:24 pm Post subject: |
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Oh I know. But the weirdy shape behind it that kinda goes from light to dark from the inside out is what I don't like. To follow Viral's suggestion, consider placing something in front of parts of Kirby to make it look more like it fits in.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:28 pm Post subject: |
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This looks great. I give it a 7.7/10
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:30 pm Post subject: |
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hmm ok ok:
here are some suggestions:
1) remove the text from there
2) center the kirby
3) place 2 layers of scanlines 1 behind the kirby and another one on top but with a low opacity
4) place the text but make it little and place it on a corner (( I would say the right lower corner will make it ))
5)post to see how it looks?
__ really the design of the background doesn't feel very kirby-ish
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:39 pm Post subject: |
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I like it right now but I think gogodr's will make it great. I think you should a piece of kirby food like a cake or something.
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krazedkat I post too much
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:51 pm Post subject: |
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Hmmm. Why do you want me to comment? I think it's good. I prefer it with the scanlines though. Without it looks too plain.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:23 pm Post subject: |
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Del C: wrote: | Hmmm. Why do you want me to comment? I think it's good. I prefer it with the scanlines though. Without it looks too plain. |
It's a script. It changes to whatever your username is.
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krazedkat I post too much
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:57 pm Post subject: |
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XD I see. Another one of these annoying tricks
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 4:09 pm Post subject: |
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I don't think the font fits it for some reason. Other than that, I like it.
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 4:11 pm Post subject: |
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I like it without the scanlines, maybe you could place the text somewhere else also?
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