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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater
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Mobsy Master Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 8:47 am Post subject: |
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I think its really well done. The colours are nicely matched and there are justa few details I'm not too sure about:
- The little black line under Kairi's front bracelet? :S
- The shine on the shoulders. I think in both cases, although more in Kairi's case, the shine you applied stands out too much and looks very unatural compared to the rest.
Other than that, nice! Keep it up.
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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater
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Mobsy wrote: | I think its really well done. The colours are nicely matched and there are justa few details I'm not too sure about:
- The little black line under Kairi's front bracelet? :S
- The shine on the shoulders. I think in both cases, although more in Kairi's case, the shine you applied stands out too much and looks very unatural compared to the rest.
Other than that, nice! Keep it up. |
DAMN I MISSED THAT.
And in the shoulders eh, I guess I should tone it down some more next time I do it.
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:41 pm Post subject: |
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The shirt of Kairi seems a bit, out of position. Otherwise, looks really nice.
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NothingToShow Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:26 pm Post subject: |
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It is really beautiful, yes. But I do think that the characters are looking a little too "stiff", like statues. Needs a tad more motion, and less straight lines.
Keep it up.
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Simon :v Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 5:02 pm Post subject: |
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You half-assed the hands, IMO, Bryan. ;_;
My other sentiments have been pointed out already, so no need to be redundant.
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 8:36 pm Post subject: |
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Looks alright. Good job.
when i was scrolling, looked like namine blended with background.
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