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Sym How do I cheat?
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 6:46 pm Post subject: [still WIP] Continued work on the Experiment |
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So I fixed the truncation and the skewed depth. I actually brought myself to calculate the perspective. I'm pretty much done with the character, bit I'm still going to see about a background.
Tell me what you think.
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Simon :v Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 7:32 pm Post subject: |
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| ...I feel like her lower half is too wide in comparison to her upper half.
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Sym How do I cheat?
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Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 7:37 pm Post subject: |
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| [AM]Misery wrote: | | ...I feel like her lower half is too wide in comparison to her upper half. |
It's definitely not classical anatomy, but it's just my personal preference. I emphasized the curves, especially at the hips, to retain an hourglass figure.
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Roy Advanced Cheater
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 1:56 pm Post subject: |
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| I personally think the lower half is waay too big, but besides from that.. Good work!
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noko_112 Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 2:09 pm Post subject: |
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| knee looks a littel wierd, but i can live with it
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 3:29 pm Post subject: |
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| It's just too damn creepy with an elephants ass.
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Sym How do I cheat?
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:14 pm Post subject: |
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| Viral wrote: | | It's just too damn creepy with an elephants ass. |
I happen to like elephant ass.
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br0l0ck Cheater
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:20 pm Post subject: |
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| Give her a bath.
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Sym How do I cheat?
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:33 pm Post subject: |
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| DEVELOPERS DEVELOPERS wrote: | | Give her a bath. |
Wait, what?
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 9:33 pm Post subject: |
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| It looks like you're drawing for iamahobo.
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br0l0ck Cheater
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 10:29 pm Post subject: |
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| Sym wrote: | | DEVELOPERS DEVELOPERS wrote: | | Give her a bath. |
Wait, what? | Her face and body looks dirty, not really like a skin tone.
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Sym How do I cheat?
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Posted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 10:38 pm Post subject: |
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| DEVELOPERS DEVELOPERS wrote: | | Sym wrote: | | DEVELOPERS DEVELOPERS wrote: | | Give her a bath. |
Wait, what? | Her face and body looks dirty, not really like a skin tone. |
Really, any color can be a skin tone. Any color at all. It merely depends on the lighting. Here, though, I went for the traditional red + yellow + white.
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Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 5:49 am Post subject: |
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| It's very good, anatomy looks good, except for the knee, looks a bit too thin comparing the the upper and lower leg.
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Posted: Sat Nov 14, 2009 6:11 am Post subject: |
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| Oh yeah, and that's a weird ass shirt if you ask me. It's not being held up
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BADS:
Eyes
Freckles
Kneecap Lines
Wide lower half
GOODS:
Hair
Upper half of body
Texture
Clothes
Skin tone
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