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Muazam Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:10 pm Post subject: Kallen |
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Does the boarder suck?
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:12 pm Post subject: |
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the light source is a bit...eh...flashy?
try making it a bit smaller but ur boreder is smexy =D
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Jeff Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:12 pm Post subject: |
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The light source doesn't really work... if you're going to use one, make sure you're using it right, it's to add depth, not just to throw around.
The lighting in the render doesn't match the light source at all, learn to burn / dodge tool.
Also, the border is decent, kind of sharp, just cut the outsides and save as a .png for transparency.
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:14 pm Post subject: |
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did u use an arrow brush? if u did, make sure it flows with the charactor, meaning that in which way shes going make sure it goes like opposite or it goes with the charactor dont put random arrows
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Jeff Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:16 pm Post subject: |
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shadowkid wrote: | did u use an arrow brush? if u did, make sure it flows with the charactor, meaning that in which way shes going make sure it goes like opposite or it goes with the charactor dont put random arrows | Lol, I've done random arrows before, it worked out ok, not that good though.
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Daniel. I post too much
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Jeff wrote: | shadowkid wrote: | did u use an arrow brush? if u did, make sure it flows with the charactor, meaning that in which way shes going make sure it goes like opposite or it goes with the charactor dont put random arrows | Lol, I've done random arrows before, it worked out ok, not that good though. |
but in this picture it doesnt turn out right XD
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Muazam Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:26 pm Post subject: |
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This sig was meant to be kinda flashy, so the light source isn't probably.
And about the arrows, they are from a brush set. the arrows turned Ok IMO.
Thanks for the comments. =)
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Jeff Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:27 pm Post subject: |
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Muazam wrote: | This sig was meant to be kinda flashy, so the light source isn't probably.
And about the arrows, they are from a brush set. the arrows turned Ok IMO.
Thanks for the comments. =) |
it's a decent sig, just the light throws it off.
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 8:28 pm Post subject: |
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Muazam wrote: | This sig was meant to be kinda flashy, so the light source isn't probably.
And about the arrows, they are from a brush set. the arrows turned Ok IMO.
Thanks for the comments. =) |
haha np anywayz ill giv this sig about a 7.5/10
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 9:07 pm Post subject: |
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Light source destroyed it.
DUDES, I've been watching 4 of the best Art DVDs I've ever seen and I'm improving the Godzilla image using some of what I've learned.
Unfortunately the jaw can not be fixed. I would have to redo it and I really don't wanna ruin it like that.
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 9:19 pm Post subject: |
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border is a bit sharp xP try smoothing the curves
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zyndr0m I post too much
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 3:25 am Post subject: |
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Pen tool was badly used in this sig...
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redslothx Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 3:57 am Post subject: |
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Light source is off =0
The one you made was under the render, yet in the render it self, it's obvious that it should be in front of him. His neck area has a shadow, and his face is lit up.
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Phixen I post too much
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:00 am Post subject: |
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*Her.
Light source really is off. You should not use the Freeform Pentool, if you did that is. Border is...eh. Text needs to be a little less stand-out-ish.
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Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:38 am Post subject: |
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I presume this thread had nothing to do with me?
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