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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 7:54 pm    Post subject: TopWritings, where your words belong! Reply with quote

[I never wanted to post in RS but I accidentally posted, and It cannot be moved by sponge so I posted here Smile]


I felt pretty bored today so I started to write a story... I kinda had fun writing it and it turned out pretty good still only 2/6 finished (not even half done)

you can sign up here

http://topwritings.com/


heres my story Very Happy

http://topwritings.com/writing.php?id=32

- Chapter two-

http://topwritings.com/writing.php?id=32&chapter=2

This website has unique abilities

While writing a story you can highlight the genre the story is based on

you can write a summary

you can make multiple chapters

ability to make the writings interactive or only for you

mark it "finished" so if your partnered with some one the person can't
edit it
Vote system you can vote for the story if you like it

you can comment on the story

You can send PM's

Theres a "Highlight + Search" when your viewing a story to help let you know what a certain word means.

Thats most of its unique ablities

Also note, this was created by my Uncle, the whole website, He may have used some help from some sites but he has not used any one elses work such as in sources, open releases or stuff like that, its all his work.

You can visit his actual site at http://waqar.ca/
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I joined.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You can make any kind of writing you want, like Stories, Poems, Scripts of a play etc.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have the goofiest fucking story I wrote like 4 years ago. Oh god, so uploading it once I find it.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I need some feedback on my writing style. Its been two years since Ive written a piece of science fiction.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh shit, I found it.

It's written like shit since I was just a pup in those days. There's a bunch of errors and problems, but it's pretty funny.

http://topwritings.com/writing.php?id=35&name=Jaws%20Sequel
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lol saw it.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

@TS, your writing style is weird. You're not supposed to make a paragraph describing each character like that... In the story it self, you should describe them. But meh you can write however you want.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Drkgodz wrote:
@TS, your writing style is weird. You're not supposed to make a paragraph describing each character like that... In the story it self, you should describe them. But meh you can write however you want.


Advice on mine pl0x.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aviar wrote:
Drkgodz wrote:
@TS, your writing style is weird. You're not supposed to make a paragraph describing each character like that... In the story it self, you should describe them. But meh you can write however you want.


Advice on mine pl0x.


Many grammatical errors.

Some strange sentences that look like they tried too hard for the sake of detail.

Quote:
The silent rumbling of the vehicle as it warmed the complex minute internal mechanics which drove the greater whole, the overall purpose.


Sentence fragments.

Work on flow, it gets choppy as it goes on.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

slovach wrote:
Aviar wrote:
Drkgodz wrote:
@TS, your writing style is weird. You're not supposed to make a paragraph describing each character like that... In the story it self, you should describe them. But meh you can write however you want.


Advice on mine pl0x.


Many grammatical errors.

Some strange sentences that look like they tried too hard for the sake of detail.

Quote:
The silent rumbling of the vehicle as it warmed the complex minute internal mechanics which drove the greater whole, the overall purpose.


Sentence fragments.

Work on flow, it gets choppy as it goes on.


I try hard on the detail since I enjoy being able to paint pictures with words (Ill go over what was written later) and Ill have a look at grammar later (friday).

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Detail is good to have, but overdoing it is possible. You want to keep the pacing and flow, not bog it down with unnecessary fluff.
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 10:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alright, thanks for the criticism. Ill see what I can remove without damaging the ambience or overall sense of the story.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 9:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not sure but if you want images in it you can use the tags thatr you might use in HTML

like <img></img>

Or I think he disabled those tags, Iono try

<b><s><u><br><hr><center> and all the tags that doesn't ruin or mess up the story to much are available for you to use

the buttons for Bold Italics and Underline only works in IE right now, not on any other known browsers (tested on FF, doesn't work, Tested on Google Chrome, Doesn't work)

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 7:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Imma write a story on this later.
I<3writing humor stories.

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