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Sharpies! Master Cheater
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 2:45 pm Post subject: Robotic kinda sig. |
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Rate/c&c please. :3
Figured I'd try to keep this place alive since it seems a tad... less active as of late.
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Snow1337 Catastrophic Cheatah
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 5:36 pm Post subject: |
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I don't like the middle text "Onward", the rest flows together rather well.. I would change the border, I like the tech border in the top right and bottom right.
3/5 good work brah
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 5:49 pm Post subject: |
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Doesn't really have a focal point, so make something stand out.
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Snow1337 Catastrophic Cheatah
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Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2010 5:49 pm Post subject: |
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Bobi! wrote: | Doesn't really have a focal point, so make something stand out. |
True
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:16 pm Post subject: |
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Vao wrote: | Bobi! wrote: | Doesn't really have a focal point, so make something stand out. |
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I agree, can't see how the render works in this one.
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KiwiMan Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:52 pm Post subject: |
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Theres no focal, theres somewhat flow and you need the border to well blend in a bit more, it stands out a bit too much.
I cannot tell exactly what the render is, all I can see is an arm??
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Bobi! Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 4:53 pm Post subject: |
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KiwiMan wrote: | Theres no focal, theres somewhat flow and you need the border to well blend in a bit more, it stands out a bit too much.
I cannot tell exactly what the render is, all I can see is an arm?? |
I think it's a truck.
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:12 pm Post subject: |
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Bobi! wrote: | KiwiMan wrote: | Theres no focal, theres somewhat flow and you need the border to well blend in a bit more, it stands out a bit too much.
I cannot tell exactly what the render is, all I can see is an arm?? |
I think it's a truck. |
Behind the text it almost looks like a robot head thing, above the arm/truck there looks like its a low opacity computer screen, lol.
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Sharpies! Master Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2010 5:58 pm Post subject: |
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LOL it's a robot with a computer head. D:
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