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Dudenator Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 2:24 pm Post subject: Second Signature... |
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Much better then the first in my opinion, actually did something.
Thanks chidori for your tutorial.
I will be uploading future signatures here.
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:16 pm Post subject: |
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You didn't even follow his tutorial correctly.
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Dudenator Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 6:25 pm Post subject: |
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I didn't want to... Actually I didn't know how . But I like it.
Also, useless post.
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:02 pm Post subject: |
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Dudenator wrote: | I didn't want to... Actually I didn't know how . But I like it.
Also, useless post. |
No that wasn't a useless post, you need to learn to understand tutorials, if you don't get something, ask in the thread or Google it
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Dudenator Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:44 pm Post subject: |
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This isn't for the tutorial this is for my art. Please critique the art and not the fact I didn't follow the tutorial. That was most of my picture I only skipped 3 steps but that's not the point.
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 7:50 pm Post subject: |
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Dudenator wrote: | This isn't for the tutorial this is for my art. Please critique the art and not the fact I didn't follow the tutorial. That was most of my picture I only skipped 3 steps but that's not the point. | No, this is about the tutorial. Follow it correctly and it won't end up looking so horrible.
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Dudenator Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:54 pm Post subject: |
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The only things I didn't do were the gradient map where he put it so the sides were more yellow and the middle more blue because I didn't know how and the ocean ripple because when I tried to apply it, it didn't do anything probably me messing it up. But still two steps couldn't make it that much better. And I tried to follow it to the best of my abilities ( Not much...) and this is how it turned out for my first half decent piece I think it looks good.
Edit: Added another signature.
Don't know what type of text I should use
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emil Expert Cheater
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 7:58 am Post subject: |
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Try making the second signature blend more, it needs more flow. I don't know what to look at, it looks clashed on.
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Phox I post too much
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:29 am Post subject: |
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Don't use text yet. When you get more advanced, you can start using text.
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Dudenator Cheater
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:16 pm Post subject: |
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Suggestions please? The second one I didn't use a tutorial or anything I made it myself but I don't know how to make it flow more. Kk, I won't use text for a while.
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 9:23 pm Post subject: |
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Looks like you just slapped on a BG and a render and added a brush
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 10:16 pm Post subject: |
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No, that is just a render but I made the planet myself and it was actually time consuming and tedious and I made the star field and did just use a brush but you have to admit it does look somewhat better then my first one ( the one in the other topic ) .
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 8:55 am Post subject: |
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Ok...
The dragon one is ok, the choice of coulours is fine, but its missing some direction or flow... Like its all over the place in a way.
The space one is a good idea, but the background colours don't match with the necron colours (he is a necron, right?). Like, his armour is silver, dull metallic, whereas the background suddenly brings in green and red and all these flashy colours. I would have gone more for a futuristic desert kind of background, maybe a combination of a desert and ruins?
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 11:03 am Post subject: |
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Ya, I see what you mean. Okay I'll try to make it more deserty but I'm not sure how to fix the dragon one. I'll mess around with them both and see what happens.
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Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:12 pm Post subject: |
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If you made that planet and star field then that is not bad at all.. my first *space* work.. I did the earth and moon and a star field and it didn't look as good.
Keep practicing and you will be great one day
Yeah I am back from being banned for bullshit lol
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