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Farr. Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 9:03 pm Post subject: two new siggies |
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comments, and chose which one you like better.
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Snow1337 Catastrophic Cheatah
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Posted: Wed Dec 23, 2009 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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My vote is the second one, it's more detailed and I always love the pen tool effects.. and the text sticks out and looks better.
Suggestion, that pen tool swirl around iron man in the second one.. I would lower the opacity to like 60 or 70.. would look better in my opinion
Good job.
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The second but the pentool is in the wrong spot. that kills it for me. the first needs more contrast
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Farr. Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 12:02 am Post subject: |
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| Rainbow wrote: | | The second but the pentool is in the wrong spot. that kills it for me. the first needs more contrast |
where should I have put the pentool. Or should I get rid of it completely?
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 12:37 am Post subject: |
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Nice, I vote for the 2nd, I like the spiral going around IronMan.
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:14 am Post subject: |
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| So... Was the pentool a good idea or no? I only added it because the sig would look empty otherwise.
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Snow1337 Catastrophic Cheatah
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 1:16 am Post subject: |
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I like it, you have creativity like me.. but most of the trolls in this section will say your work sucks if you add more than faint text and a 1 pixel border because it will be "over crowded".
Keep the pen tool, don't let anyone tell you shit about it.. its good sigs
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| Vao wrote: | I like it, you have creativity like me.. but most of the trolls in this section will say your work sucks if you add more than faint text and a 1 pixel border because it will be "over crowded".
Keep the pen tool, don't let anyone tell you shit about it.. its good sigs |
Yooooooooooooo you're an idiot.
@Raven:
Kill the scanlines on the first, or atleast erase them around the focal, you don't want a constant effect over the whole thing, that'll ruin your flow.
Is a bit monotonic and it's pretty meh.
The second tag on the other hand, isn't bad.
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Effects are much nicer. Better colour range too.
Work on text placment, it's too out of the way currently, so rather than focusing on the face your eyes are drawn there.
Try putting it to the lower left of his chin.
Also, the pen tooling.
Delete any that covers his face.
Nice work on the second.
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 2:34 am Post subject: |
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| Viral wrote: | | Vao wrote: | I like it, you have creativity like me.. but most of the trolls in this section will say your work sucks if you add more than faint text and a 1 pixel border because it will be "over crowded".
Keep the pen tool, don't let anyone tell you shit about it.. its good sigs |
Yooooooooooooo you're an idiot.
@Raven:
Kill the scanlines on the first, or atleast erase them around the focal, you don't want a constant effect over the whole thing, that'll ruin your flow.
Is a bit monotonic and it's pretty meh.
The second tag on the other hand, isn't bad.
Tag #2:
Effects are much nicer. Better colour range too.
Work on text placment, it's too out of the way currently, so rather than focusing on the face your eyes are drawn there.
Try putting it to the lower left of his chin.
Also, the pen tooling.
Delete any that covers his face.
Nice work on the second. | I agree with Viral's thoughts on the second. It looks great, but the pentooling covering his face is just...weird.
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 3:12 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, the second is the best IMO
Pen tool adjustment is needed though.
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 10:02 am Post subject: |
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| ok thanks for the tips people, I'll be sure to remember them when I make new sigs
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 10:38 am Post subject: |
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i think the first one would look better with the render over the scan lines
Pentooling is aiight, but you should have set it to dither and the glow should be the same colour as the line itself.
Also, i really like them actually. nicely done.
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Snow1337 Catastrophic Cheatah
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Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 1:02 am Post subject: |
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Yea I would reverse the pentool and make it go the other way around on the second sig and take it away from the front of his face and it use that. Nothing else that I see is really needed to be changed.. It has a nice mix of grunge colors and the text is golden, not out of place and doesn't stick out to much.
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Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 1:49 pm Post subject: |
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Personally I really like the top one, although I think if the render and text were above the line effects it would work better.
Can't wait to see more of your work when you get around to it.
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Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 5:30 pm Post subject: |
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i like 2
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