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Sym How do I cheat?
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 2:00 am Post subject: [WIP] Sexy Experiment |
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I'm trying, in an effort to kill my artist's block/lethargy, to not stray out of my artistic comfort zone by the one way I know: girls. Good motivation, no?
Tell me what you think of it so far. Should I finish a background on it?
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from waist to top is perfect as it it, from wait to bottom, well I guess thats the part you are missing.
looks great though.
I like that modern comic style of drawing and shading you are using.
before thinking on placing a background or not finish it. I mean.. there is not much to do .. only the shading of the shorts, the shading method is different than the one you used on the jacket.
and then do the clean up, there are some extra lines that shouldn't be there.
about ratings:
as it is now it gets my 8/10 but you can easily get my 10/10 if you finish it.
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sponge cake recipe Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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She gets rather fat rather quickly doesn't she.
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Sym How do I cheat?
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Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 2:51 am Post subject: |
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gogodr wrote: | from waist to top is perfect as it it, from wait to bottom, well I guess thats the part you are missing.
looks great though.
I like that modern comic style of drawing and shading you are using.
before thinking on placing a background or not finish it. I mean.. there is not much to do .. only the shading of the shorts, the shading method is different than the one you used on the jacket.
and then do the clean up, there are some extra lines that shouldn't be there.
about ratings:
as it is now it gets my 8/10 but you can easily get my 10/10 if you finish it. |
Awesome, thank you so much for your time. I haven't rendered the jacket yet, but I'll try to keep the focus in mind.
Again, thank you for the critique.
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its pretty sweet.
infact i think you should finish background
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taken4time How do I cheat?
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great as usual but i think it could be a little better o.O
if you do start on the background... go with some.... hm r.r maybe a sketchy car or a computer desk or like um... a sidewalk on it's way to school or so on r.r
my rating 7/10
after finishing 9/10-10/10
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Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 2:04 pm Post subject: Re: [WIP] Sexy Experiment |
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Sym wrote: | I'm trying, in an effort to kill my artist's block/lethargy, to not stray out of my artistic comfort zone by the one way I know: girls. Good motivation, no?
Tell me what you think of it so far. Should I finish a background on it? |
Head to hoe is nice.
Its a too tall and if your planning on doing a background using the same style.
Also you could use this in a comic.
9/10
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It's all nice, but she's fat..
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