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redslothx
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Lot of things wrong here. Care to name a few?
o.o
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| Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 6:03 pm Post subject: |
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| Lighting on the left side does not look good.
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don't know how to add it any other way without making it too strong or too weak =x
position is right, but i don't know how to fix it ._.
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| Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 6:06 pm Post subject: |
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Looks perfect to me o-o
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| Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 6:07 pm Post subject: |
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background looks a little odd and the top rights light is a bit too dark imo
renders face is a bit unclear but thats not your fault
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redslothx
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| Megalock Broman wrote: | background looks a little odd and the top rights light is a bit too dark imo
renders face is a bit unclear but thats not your fault |
what top right lights o.o
Light source is supposed to come from the left
right side is supposed to be dark o.o
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| Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:07 pm Post subject: |
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| Ozymandias wrote: | | Megalock Broman wrote: | background looks a little odd and the top rights light is a bit too dark imo
renders face is a bit unclear but thats not your fault |
what top right lights o.o
Light source is supposed to come from the left
right side is supposed to be dark o.o |
I meant it's a bit too dark when looking from where the light source is coming from, like it looks like it should be a bit lighter
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redslothx
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| Megalock Broman wrote: | | Ozymandias wrote: | | Megalock Broman wrote: | background looks a little odd and the top rights light is a bit too dark imo
renders face is a bit unclear but thats not your fault |
what top right lights o.o
Light source is supposed to come from the left
right side is supposed to be dark o.o |
I meant it's a bit too dark when looking from where the light source is coming from, like it looks like it should be a bit lighter |
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| Ozymandias wrote: | | Megalock Broman wrote: | | Ozymandias wrote: | | Megalock Broman wrote: | background looks a little odd and the top rights light is a bit too dark imo
renders face is a bit unclear but thats not your fault |
what top right lights o.o
Light source is supposed to come from the left
right side is supposed to be dark o.o |
I meant it's a bit too dark when looking from where the light source is coming from, like it looks like it should be a bit lighter |
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That is much better. Make his body a little lighter though, it's too dark.
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| Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:19 pm Post subject: |
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Looks better like that 
I dont think hes body is too dark though, just maybe by his right arm it looks a tiny bit too dark (our right, his left)
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redslothx
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| Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:23 pm Post subject: |
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bleh.....
i preffer the right side dark like it originally was.
Too bring makes the render looked slapped on.
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| Seems monotone. Make the light source look more natural yet more obvious, add more wow factor to it. It's boring right now, and no, I don't mean you should add C4D-based effects, depends on your idea, I'm not really sure about the concept as well.
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I think its bit oversharpend but the effects are good, also i dont like it being montonic, u should try something else then displacements maps.
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| Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:48 am Post subject: Re: Gears of War |
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| Daft Punk wrote: |
Lot of things wrong here. Care to name a few?
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The background to me look too blurry for me. also not allot of detail in the background.
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redslothx
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| Phixen wrote: | Seems monotone. Make the light source look more natural yet more obvious, add more wow factor to it. It's boring right now, and no, I don't mean you should add C4D-based effects, depends on your idea, I'm not really sure about the
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http://planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-36204
http://gearsofwar.xbox.com/uploadedImages/Media/Wallpapers/GOW2_Wallpapers/Gears2_wp2_1024.jpg
because of render color, it will seem "monotone"
render = light brown
sig = light brown to match render.
i'm not going to make a pretty blue, yellow, green, red, etc., for a brown render.
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