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Phox I post too much
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 5:13 pm Post subject: Pixel sword (Updated 6 times) (I want advice!) |
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Someone else here did a pixel sword earlier today I think. It looked like fun, so I gave it a go.
I'm quite aware that it is not perfect and details should be added on the blade.
Edit: I have made some changes. I shaded the blade, remove the glow, and changed the colors of the outlines, all as you suggested, CrisNMP.
Edit #2: I made another version just now that has a slightly more rounded out blade.
Edit #3: Added runes.
#4: runes glow.
#5: Various changes.
#6: Stuff on the hilt.
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I rounded the blade of the sword. |
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Last edited by Phox on Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:18 pm; edited 7 times in total |
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 6:40 pm Post subject: |
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I want to play but I think yours is better
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Borq Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 7:07 pm Post subject: |
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Shading is non-existent.
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 7:10 pm Post subject: |
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(^^^) wrote: | I want to play but I think yours is better | I think both of yours suck.
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 7:27 pm Post subject: |
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but your whole job is to criticize as harshly as possible so...
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CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 7:31 pm Post subject: |
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Actually I do agree that they are pretty bad, you can try learning the basics of pixel art before showing your work if you dislike being criticized.
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 7:38 pm Post subject: |
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Nah criticism is fine...none of my art is that good and i know it
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CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
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To help you out, I would remove the glow, replace black outlines with darker lines of the colour around it, add shading and lightning then practise till you get the hang of it and work on the actual design. I'll post a quick picture of what I mean for the first ones soon.
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CrisNMP wrote: | To help you out, I would remove the glow, replace black outlines with darker lines of the colour around it, add shading and lightning then practise till you get the hang of it and work on the actual design. I'll post a quick picture of what I mean for the first ones soon. |
A LIGHTNING SWORD?!?!?!?!?
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 9:08 pm Post subject: |
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its ok but u need to draw the sword in a more unique way this is just simple to me
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spider45 (dib1500) wrote: | its ok but u need to draw the sword in a more unique way this is just simple to me  | Leave this section. Every post I've seen from you has been completely useless and slightly retarded.
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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:34 pm Post subject: |
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If I were to make glows, I would lighten the color near the end. ex: Red, lighter red, lighter, etc.
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Phox I post too much
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 1:02 pm Post subject: |
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I updated it with CrisNMP's helpful suggestions.
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 1:14 pm Post subject: The Middle |
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The middle of the sord is very importent you can make red light scratches holes shadeing etc
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CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 1:44 pm Post subject: |
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Gradients in pixel art is a no.
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