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bfsdbsdfbdsfb Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 54
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:36 pm Post subject: Pixel trident finished (Finally) |
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Eh finished it, now I will take critique but don't flame pz.
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Muazam Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 0
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:53 pm Post subject: |
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Need more style, Im not sure what I should comment on here. Its too plain imo.
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Chidori Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 1
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:55 pm Post subject: |
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you should have used a picture for refrence, the top looks weird
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bfsdbsdfbdsfb Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 54
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 12:57 pm Post subject: |
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Muazam wrote: | Need more style, Im not sure what I should comment on here. Its too plain imo. |
I was trying to make something bigger than this
And i wanted to go into details on shading (I failed at the blade though).
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[SPW]Killamoocow Master Cheater Reputation: 30
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:02 pm Post subject: |
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It's nice, you should put it in a game or something
needs to be more flashy though, like more design IMO
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Localhost I post too much Reputation: 0
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:33 pm Post subject: |
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The transition of the gray is too subtle... Make it flow nicer.
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~Pineapple! Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 2
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:12 pm Post subject: |
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Looks a bit strange. Maybe, as chidori said, use a picture for reference.
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Simon :v Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 38
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 2:16 pm Post subject: |
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That gives me the image of a pitchfork, rather than a trident.
You need to add more deadly flair, and make it look like a beautiful, yet dangerous weapon.
However, the handle and the little... jewel... thing at the bottom were done quite nicely. :3
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer Reputation: 126
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 4:42 pm Post subject: |
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Shading requires bounce-light.
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Muazam Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 0
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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Groundbold Assasin wrote: | Muazam wrote: | Need more style, Im not sure what I should comment on here. Its too plain imo. |
I was trying to make something bigger than this
And i wanted to go into details on shading (I failed at the blade though). |
I see, You have Improved, Keep it up.
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Phox I post too much Reputation: 110
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 5:08 pm Post subject: |
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That's some nice shading you've got there.
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iGod Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: -1
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Posted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 5:42 pm Post subject: |
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Too flat IMO use more shades.
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bfsdbsdfbdsfb Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 54
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 2:55 am Post subject: |
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If anyone wonders about the black dots and lines next to the "Trident" it's the colour palette i used mostly because it's easier to remember which colour goes where :X
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Borq Grandmaster Cheater Supreme Reputation: 0
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 3:09 am Post subject: |
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For a second there, I thought this was made in Flash.
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bfsdbsdfbdsfb Grandmaster Cheater Reputation: 54
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Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 4:42 am Post subject: |
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Chuck Norris wrote: | For a second there, I thought this was made in Flash. |
Mah boi, MSpaint.
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