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J² · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:08 am Post subject: [JD] Brand new Prototype sig

I realize this stock has probably already been used, but its an epic pic.
Please rate Very Happy

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Jeff · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:39 am Post subject:

Text doesn't fit, background is um, not appealing, I guess. Good effort though, I see you're getting the hang of blending.

Trucido · Moderator Reputation: 6 Joined: 08 Sep 2007 Posts: 2792

Makes me feel like I need glasses.

Too blurry.

Phixen · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 6:35 am Post subject:

Yeah, you could make the render stand out a bit more.

Kronos · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 8:04 am Post subject:

Yep, i would suggest sharpen the render a bit.. and i would replace the text and put some more near his arm... because it distracts from the focal point

Stylised · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 8:06 am Post subject:

Rework the text and clarify some things in the background. Like that wing in the bottom-left corner?

J² · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:13 am Post subject:

Kronos · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:15 am Post subject:

I still dont like the text

J² · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:21 am Post subject:

Kronos · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:26 am Post subject:

Now it distracts from focal again. I think you just leave this one without any text.

J² · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:31 am Post subject:

I never give up on my art...

Kronos · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:34 am Post subject:

Maybe set it on soft light

J² · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 10:38 am Post subject:

Why, it doesn't do much to it, barely noticable.

Oblivious · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 11:56 am Post subject:

Try using a bigger canvas.

Jeff · Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 12:56 pm Post subject:

I have so many tuts to make, give me until next weekend guys, I have 2 papers due Monday.

Also, text placement: www.youtube.com/watch?v=9A3ODycdRs8