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SirEpicWin Master Cheater
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 3:36 pm Post subject: My work so far |
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so feel free to comments and reta it 5/5
P.S(i just stared uesing photoshop two weeks ago )
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Phixen I post too much
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:29 pm Post subject: |
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None of them are good. :\ Especially the 3rd and the 4th one. Your choice of color is...ugh. Your choice of text is horrible as well, if the text isn't the focal then don't make it stand out so much. What the heck are with those yellow stuff? >.> That's not how you use C4D's, you have to set them to lighten/screen/linear dodge/darken. And then make a Color Balance Adjustments layer to adjust the color.
Go read tuts.
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@Retallion Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:49 pm Post subject: |
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Number 2 <3
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Strathe Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:53 pm Post subject: |
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Phixen wrote: | None of them are good. :\ Especially the 3rd and the 4th one. Your choice of color is...ugh. Your choice of text is horrible as well, if the text isn't the focal then don't make it stand out so much. What the heck are with those yellow stuff? >.> That's not how you use C4D's, you have to set them to lighten/screen/linear dodge/darken. And then make a Color Balance Adjustments layer to adjust the color.
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Agreed.
You just used the two colors i hate the most : Green and Yellow.
Try to vary a lil more and add some black or something.
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Sharpies! Master Cheater
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:54 pm Post subject: |
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All of them are iffy at best, 2 is a good place to start though.
You need to learn how to blend the renders (read; smudge).
However, an even bigger problem is your COLOR CHOICE. Your sigs are not monochromatic and most of us here are not colorblind. Therefore, green and yellow, especially that vibrant of a green and yellow, are no-nos together.
Scanlines almost work because it's Transformers I suppose...
For 2 weeks you could be doing worse. I'd advise you to look at some tuts and learn a bit more before you post some work though - what I said is by NO MEANS a compliment.
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SirEpicWin Master Cheater
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 4:56 pm Post subject: |
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thank you all for your comments it learn me alot.
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Strathe Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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Gokuss5 wrote: | thank you all for your comments it teaches* me alot. |
Also, that's the same story for your black/red/green text signature.
Those colors don't go together.
Off-topic :
Check the links for your signatures.
It redirects to "fagsforbugs"
because what you originally put isn't allowed in here (CEF).
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