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A freestyle poem/self debate upon Music/Love

 
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 11:36 am    Post subject: A freestyle poem/self debate upon Music/Love Reply with quote

Love is like a beautiful song, soaking it all in. Just smiling at my luck to find a song like this. Music.....
Have you ever felt this way, ever thought this way, or even this is way I feel. Have you ever done that? It's that incredible feeling in the movies that is like ecstasy. It's the middle ground between wrong and satisfaction. With her, that special person, right beside of me holding on. I could stay like that forever. That is love. That is music. Music has parts it has a rhythm and a meter to it has a predictability and a reliability to it. It starts out you, have two or three lines of building notes, they speak to you and say "hey, WOW! This is something special here...." Something great and sharp as a promise. The chorus comes and it is BLISS. It is love. The voices speak out to you from the chorus this is the one I have been waiting for. Loving anyone else is not happening. Then there is this rush of pleasure and security NOTHING else in the world can provide. But things settle down and the melody returns and you smile and clap your hands.. Your really thinking when is that chorus coming back. But you have to be waiting, you can't rush it has a rhythm to it. You can sing again and it will be the same or even better. That how songs are It grows a little louder and you RIDE IT. The message becomes a little sincere. It takes you were you have NEVER been. It has a rhythm and you JUST CAN'T stop it! Nothing ever can. As the song continues and the chorus continues. And the song ends and everything you see comes to a clarity and then it's just....... gone. ....
And the song is over and your left with is just silence. That’s love. When the song is over your still the same. Just lost your rhythm and everyday you go on like that your memory fades as you go on. No more music. no more love no more........
It hurts that you can't remember the tune and it meant alot and it eats you up inside but it still isn't there. I go back and I ask I want to sing again but there is still only silence... nothing but silence. And I was all alone and ......it’s no way to live no way for anyone to live.....

But as time goes on you find a new song and you play it you sing to it and you love it. Relationships are music; we are the notes the chords. To create music you have to be music. People everyday make music but you just don't see it because you never know what is out there what risks what, what ever you are afraid of is always rejection. The fear of rejection is able to stop a person in its track. Fear and rejection both hurt. They both hurt on a different level. Love can be made to either hurt, to cure, to make you feel happy or even depressed. It isn’t how you got it is how you handled it. Think of it has music too if you play out of tune it is bad. If you use the wrong chords you get something you didn't originally want but if you use the right chords and in tune then that is true love, true music. You just can't throw stuff together and expect to get something good. You need to KNOW what you’re writing or who you love. You just need to UNDERSTAND first then you dive into it. You have to give it your all or nothing in music and love. If you don’t give enough then it won't be good. As you read that poem before hand you'll understand the similarities before us Music and love is interchangeable. They can co-exist no needing one to be over the other because they are always balanced. You need your words your lyrics your notes chords sound WHATEVER you use to be balanced. If not it's over powering, being used, being corrupted. You just can't handle it if it is over-powering you your being used. You can always have music but sometimes it isn’t good music or bad music sometime you find a song that is great and you want to listen to it forever. But if you listen to it for to long then it gets old and it is stupid and boring. Love/Music which was I talking about? Both. love and music can and will get boring. Music with out words is a sex relationship. Sometimes you just want sounds and not words. Sometimes you want sex but not a real relationship. Love can hurt if it is too much, Too much music can hurt your ears. See Love and music is interchangeable you can switch those two words around so much it doesn't have two different meanings. words in music and love can hurt. If you place those words right them you can find yourself with them You just can't give up on both. If you do then you get poor music and love.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 12:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'd say this is more on an essay than a freestyle or in poetry it's called free verse poetry

nonmetrical verse: verse without a fixed metrical pattern, usually having unrhymed lines of varying length
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 12:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well please comment of the infomoration I put into this. Not about what it is pz meng.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 28, 2008 8:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

you're comparing love with music, in your post you are telling the times when musics go old and suddenly they will be forgotten... but I disagree with love being old and suddenly be forgotten... Yes both of them share the same joy to each other but in matters of time Love can never be forgotten and can never be old unlike music.

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Sorry for my criticism... its about 3 months since I read another literary article like yours... thanks for the share
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 29, 2008 2:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

But the old love is a verb and old music is a noun. Old Love is when you have two lovely elderly people, THAT is old love. Old music ids music on records...
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