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CrisNMP Fun Supervisor Reputation: 16
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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2015 12:05 pm Post subject: Illustration |
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Hey everyone here's something new.
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gogodr I post too much Reputation: 125
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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2015 2:07 pm Post subject: |
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I dig it.
Some color would help a lot to understand it tho.
I understood that the man is the seed and the above is a tree after I saw the title "My blessing, my flower" , then I saw the ground.
At first I thought it was a darker scene of smoke instead of it being a tree.
One last thing, the lines thickness and detail on the very top, don't match with the rest of the piece as much. It becomes more thick and simple there.
Overall 8/10, I really like it. |
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CrisNMP Fun Supervisor Reputation: 16
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Posted: Tue Apr 28, 2015 8:45 pm Post subject: |
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gogodr wrote: | I dig it.
Some color would help a lot to understand it tho.
I understood that the man is the seed and the above is a tree after I saw the title "My blessing, my flower" , then I saw the ground.
At first I thought it was a darker scene of smoke instead of it being a tree.
One last thing, the lines thickness and detail on the very top, don't match with the rest of the piece as much. It becomes more thick and simple there.
Overall 8/10, I really like it. |
Thanks a lot for the feedback, another person said something similar to your first though. Another suggestion for colour we had was sort of a watercolour splatter on the flower. Maybe that will kick things up a bit.
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer Reputation: 126
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Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2015 1:32 am Post subject: |
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I think this would make an awesome wallpaper! Especially with that watercolor idea. _________________
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atom0s Moderator Reputation: 200
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Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2015 2:06 pm Post subject: |
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Agreed, looks great. Would like to see it with color as well. _________________
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Brillia How do I cheat? Reputation: 21
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Posted: Fri May 01, 2015 4:48 am Post subject: |
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Looks great, even without colors! _________________
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CrisNMP Fun Supervisor Reputation: 16
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Posted: Mon May 04, 2015 3:23 pm Post subject: |
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@Up2Admin: Thanks a lot, looking forward to adding that still not sure if I'm going to do it digital or traditional watercolour.
@atom0s, Brillias: Thanks a lot _________________
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